Composition Exercise, Day 2

Today’s iteration of the same image switches over to 4×5 format, crops out some of the vertical elements, and pushes the hand distorted by glass over to the far edge of one of the “rule of thirds” lines.

What do you think of the differences between today’s and yesterday’s?

I feel like there’s a greater sense of impending motion in this image compared to the previous one. It also seems a little more crowded to me, a little more intimate.

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